Draft Workshop: Kayleigh

1. Overall Effect of the Visual Essay
1. Essay has moderate level of overall impact and presentation is moderately effective.  The header image gives an indication to the content of the website, Paperless Future.  The dark background may be perceived that the future is looking bleak.  Based on the content of the website, that may or may not be want to revised.
2. Composer Feelings/ Development
1. Essay provides modest information about the composer's  developments/ feelings.  It is difficult to determine what the conclusive feelings are towards the paperless future.  It might be helpful if there is an indication given if a paperless future is a positive or negative thing.  
3. Visual Coherence
1. Essay needs more visual coherence.  At the moment, the background colors are relatively dark, with the exception of the spectrum of colors at the beginning of the webpage.  The text is in different fonts and white color.  It is difficult to determine if there is significance to these factors.  
4. Visual Salience
1. Essay doesn't identify 2-4 major points.  It is a little difficult to determine the various points/ thoughts that were originally tackled in the inquiry essay and are now in website form.
5. Organization of the Essay
1. Essay's organization is helpful and clear.  There is a link to washingtonpost.com and an online survey to be filled out.  Below this is a Youtube link, followed by a picture of a stack of newspapers.  It may help the website if this was a little bit more elaborate. 
6. Documentation of the Images
1. Images not correctly documented.  Perhaps a Work Cited page?