Wow, Maitreyi! You certainly had a lot to say. That's not a bad thing. I appreciate how much work you put into your video review. It's pretty hard to hear throughout - the audio levels are low but not unlistenable - but your analysis is worth listening to. Your focus on the rhetorical appeals is strong; I especially like how you focus on ethos on the about section. That's definitely something readers would expect. I share your sentiments exactly about the recipes and the linking; I'm always wary of a Web site that LINKS its key content. Excellent focus, Maitreyi. The Wysocki focus for color juxtaposition could be developed more in depth (how about the images vs. design) but you nail the typography.
Wow, Maitreyi! You certainly had a lot to say. That's not a bad thing. I appreciate how much work you put into your video review. It's pretty hard to hear throughout - the audio levels are low but not unlistenable - but your analysis is worth listening to. Your focus on the rhetorical appeals is strong; I especially like how you focus on ethos on the about section. That's definitely something readers would expect. I share your sentiments exactly about the recipes and the linking; I'm always wary of a Web site that LINKS its key content. Excellent focus, Maitreyi. The Wysocki focus for color juxtaposition could be developed more in depth (how about the images vs. design) but you nail the typography.
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